pitch evaluation

I think that the pitch overall was a success because as a group we had the audiences attention throughout our pitch, and in the end we ended up with a high score out of ten. Our feedback was fairly positive because the audience said that they liked the fact that our mise-en-scene was very detailed, as well as the fact that we had screenshots of maps showing our journey to and from the location we filmed at. One of our downfalls was the fact that we didnt fully complete the end of our storyboard, which resulted to the audience getting abit confused. We could have made the presentation easier and more interesting if we used a range of different presentation softwares like emaze. However, overall i think that the pitch was a success because the audience seemed interested in our story of our title sequence as well as the genre that we picked.