Pitch Feedback

What was good about the pitch/ideas presented

-The plot is well though out and goes well with the thriller genre
- aware of the risks and the solutions
- Very detailed
- Very interesting
- Nice consideration of psychological story
-Relevant examples used for inspiration
- Got permission for use of inspiration
-Location and props planned nicely
- Clear inspiration researched into and used
- Well thought out plan
- Compelling icon/logo
- Title of film relates well to plot
-Audience profile is detailed
- Good individual research



What would have made the pitch even better?

-Develop sound design
- A rough Soundtrack/ Soundscape
- could put match cuts in storyboard
-Finish the storyboard
-Identify genre clearer
-use different websites to present
-Be clear when wanting to add fantasy elements

Two questions to ask the group at the end of the pitch:

- How much are you going to be using a match cut to turn the water into blood?
-What is your genre?
-What font will you be using?