Pitch evaluation

Overall the pitch was good as people had given us high scores out of ten.When asked what we did well people were saying the Mise-en-scene(the location and setting) was very detailed as we had screenshots of maps which told us how long the journey would take from school and pictures of the actual location.However we hadn't completely finished the storyboard so it was unclear to people what the plot was and the layout of the entire pitch could have been easier to navigate if we used different websites like emaze.To conclude the pitch was a success as everyone seemed to like the choice of genre and what the film is about.